The music stops and echos
shimmer then fade
our voices stilled waiting
for the flood of response
I fall into the silence
all energy given away
to singing’s singular joy
A long goodbye jumps the queue
to sudden extinction
Love lives on the mountain
ashes soaking into moss
his spirit coming back
to say that 40 years were
worth it all in all
and how are things
The chatter quieted
and in its place
a single sound takes shape
One note clearly formed
on endless breath
I find it comes from me
I had been singing all along
and never knew
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a prompt from tonight’s writing group with Doug Anderson: endings
October 9, 2017 at 3:15 pm
I really like this poem a lot, the last verse especially..
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October 19, 2017 at 10:20 pm
Susan, thank you so much.
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June 25, 2018 at 4:39 pm
The last stanza of Not Quite Endings is exquisite. Thank you Kate…..
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June 26, 2018 at 3:42 pm
Hello Robin, You are most welcome.
Kate
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